{"id":16,"date":"2016-07-05T16:57:01","date_gmt":"2016-07-05T16:57:01","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/WCSCloneforClasses\/?page_id=16"},"modified":"2016-11-29T20:04:13","modified_gmt":"2016-11-29T20:04:13","slug":"journal-summary-two","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/univ-150\/journal-summary-two\/","title":{"rendered":"Journal Summary Two"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2146\/2016\/07\/midterm-checklist.xlsx\">midterm-checklist<\/a><\/p>\n<p>Throughout this semester in UNIV 150 my writing has really improved. \u00a0For my midterm I had to write an essay while being timed, which was exactly like the writing placement test. \u00a0For the writing placement test I did not pass which is the reason why I am taking UNIV 150. \u00a0However, the midterm shows how I improved this semester. \u00a0I managed to pass my midterm with a score of 100. \u00a0I feel what made me improve was the fact I kept writing essays and realized the mistakes I made with each essay. \u00a0From there I would try to not repeat tho mistakes so the flow of my essay would improve. \u00a0The main problem I had in the beginning of the semester was my shift in point in view. \u00a0I would easily switch from third person to second person and not realize it. \u00a0Now that I improved I can see that my essays fit together now and it flows better for the readers. \u00a0My plans to improve more is to keep analyzing my mistakes and take time to make my essays sound better. \u00a0One way I want to make my essays better is to expand my vocabulary so I won&#8217;t be repetitive with the words I use. \u00a0Along with that I also plan to improve the speed of my writing to prepare me for the final exam. \u00a0If I manage to improve<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp; midterm-checklist Throughout this semester in UNIV 150 my writing has really improved. \u00a0For my midterm I had to write an essay while being timed, which was exactly like the writing placement test. \u00a0For the writing placement test I did&#8230; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/univ-150\/journal-summary-two\/\">Continue Reading &rarr;<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":4155,"featured_media":0,"parent":24,"menu_order":2,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/16"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/4155"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=16"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/16\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":44,"href":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/16\/revisions\/44"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/24"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/student.wp.odu.edu\/rolfa001\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=16"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}