The experiences i have had for the last couple of weeks have been about taking a quiz and working on the midterm and essay four . When i think back to the changes in my writing style from the first 12 weeks to the next 6 i feel that in terms of writing i have learned of most of my mistakes. The quiz was based on material off the book and was mainly common sense...

I have identified my weaknesses this semester as my lack of flow from the first essay, this is mainly done by reading what i say out loud. One of my major weaknesses at the beginning of the semester i felt was my thesis as i always had to look over it a couple of time to be satisfied with it. I also sometimes use the wrong point of view with my words like using...