I have identified my weaknesses this semester as my lack of flow from the first essay, this is mainly done by reading what i say out loud. One of my major weaknesses at the beginning of the semester i felt was my thesis as i always had to look over it a couple of time to be satisfied with it. I also sometimes use the wrong point of view with my words like using student or students to individual that i have been shown is also been one of my common mistakes. My essay length is not a weakness as i always like to have have extra in my essays. I am aware that i sometimes don’t understand critiques to my own writing as i do not see the mistakes that have been taught to me, or those that i learned. I like to keep my sentence structure simple, but i have been told to vary my sentence length so i have been working to change my structure. My strengths have become my proofreading of my own writing so i usually have a strong introduction body and conclusion. My plan to address my writing concerns is to talk with my students or my teacher. Another of my strengths that apply to writing is my ability to read fast as that allows meet to pick up some information that i would not have otherwise. I am comfortable with my transition from high school to college, the hardest part has been keeping myself to a schedule but i will say i have accomplished my goals. These goals are keeping are keeping good grades so that I can keep my financial aid. To keep my friends and to spend time with them every so often has also been a treasured luxury of mine.editing-skills-checklist-for-mapping-lance-journal-1