Editing Skills Checklist for Mapping (3)

My most recent essay, Response Paper on Online Privacy, was not well executed. I ended up not getting a very good grade. There were a lot of mistakes from the beginning to the end of my essay. My most weak part of this essay was the Purpose category. I received a 2/4 for having a weak and poorly stated thesis, having a slight awareness of the topic, and my reader had a vague idea as to what to expect. I noticed that I did not have a strong...